Jackie- final week submission

Hi everyone, here is my final submission for this term- I've tried to tackle the notes about her movement around fr 145, that we were discussing on the blog, her hitting a wall in some places, I've added some secondary movement/ keep alive on the dragon's feet and arms/ pole. I've started to polish up the rough patches a bit (it helped to take a week off because now I can see some of that stuff a bit more). I've also changed the second shot blocking, to reflect Victor's acting notes from the week 11 class. Any thoughts would be much appreciated. Thanks for an awesome class everyone, and I'll see you in the fall! Jackie

Viv – "Don't Like You Anymore" WIP

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I've covered most of the notes I received last class.  I'm certainly still going to work on this before class tomorrow evening.  I'm mostly curious if the speed/timing for the glance up around 260 and the turn away at the end work.  Thanks for the comments and feedback!

Shot Progress

Hey guys! Here's my shot as it's coming along - would love some feedback so I can try getting it into splines before class! Thanks!

Mallo - Bus driver

Hi Guys!
This is the newest version of my shot.
I'd like your feedback.
Thanks!

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Viv – "Burn You" WIP

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I've addressed all the notes I received last time for this shot (I can happily list the notes if needed).  I'm still not entirely happy with the expression change around frame 160.  I'm not sure if it still gets lost due to his body movements, so perhaps I should shift the expression change a few frames earlier?  I like the timing of him standing up and placing his hands on the desk, so I'd rather not delay/speed those up unless it's necessary.

Let me know what you guys think.  Thank you and have a great 4th of July!

Benoit - New pass

Hi guys!

Here is a new pass where I:
- Simplified the begining,
- Sharpened the transitions,
- Start blocking the blue guys.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/gf9fugc0yh9es25/benoit_groundpouders_006.mov

I'm still working on it, but any comment is welcome.

Thank you!

Benoit