Saturday, May 18, 2013

Jackie- dragon and girl; better?



Hi everyone, I've tried to address Victor's note that I don't need the dragon's hand gesture at the end, I just have to work with the contrast in the body and head. Is this part reading? I've also tried to fix the last gesture on the girl; the consensus was to have her gesture a bit about herself, opening up a bit and looking up a bit, but keeping it small. I've also toned down the bucket because I've gotten repeated notes that it's moving around too much. Thanks for looking and thanks for any feedback!

2 comments:

  1. Looking good. I think his last head pose looks a little broken - doesn't seem to relate to the neck or head. Also, don't forget to have her react and anticipate her dialog.

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