Kevin Vlk Hurt v21 from Kevin Vlk on Vimeo.
Monday, May 13, 2013
Kevin Vlk: Test 2 Revised
Hey, all. I revised my 3 second test shot based on Victor's notes: I increased the intensity significantly, fixed some of the posing and added the eye darts. I felt that the shot was just trying to fit in too much in 3 seconds to get it to read, so I put back in the original cut of the line which made it about 5 seconds. There is about 40 frames of new animation at the beginning to accompany the longer dialog.
This is not polished. Looking for notes on timing, movements and phrasing.
Royce did not see this shot as it is so my notes came from classmates and Victor.
Thanks!
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Hi Kevin, I like the phrasing on this overall. Simple and clear. I feel you need to amp the intensity overall to match the dialog, though. You need to sharpen up the timing and push the poses. For instance, you could sharpen the body move on "hurt" to be only 3 frames long, with some overshoot and settle. You could add some subtle head turning to match the eyes searching around. Try to add more tension on the pose for "somebody". If you pause on this pose, she looks relaxed and slightly sad, rather than desperate and frustrated.
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