Benoit - Few fixes

Hi there,

Here is the last version of my shot: https://www.dropbox.com/s/r9ys7t7ln6lv0db/benoit_clintEastwood_04.mov
I addressed Victor's notes but I am still struggling a little bit with the final attitude. What do you think?

Thank you!

Fixes

Hi Everyone!

So I think I've addressed all the notes from last class - with the exception of the breath she takes after "thursday". If I have her breath in, it destroys her mouth position or makes her body look like it's having a mini-seizure. I think I might just be doing it wrong. Any ideas? And I'm going to animate the hair next since I've pretty much nailed the body down. Thanks everyone!

Jackie- more progress

Hi everyone, Here's more progress; I've tried to address Victor's notes about the end, and I haven't started offsetting/ overlapping anything yet. On the girl, I'm trying to communicate a snooty/ snobby attitude. Is it reading? As always, I'm open to vetoes on anything, even though I'm working in spline. Thanks for viewing!

Progress So Far

Hi guys! Just wanted to upload my progress so far - I was looking for some feedback on her expression at "Thursday" - I followed Victor's drawing but now I don't know if it feels too pushed or if the expressions after it are just too bland. Advice is appreciated! Thanks!

06 week Yatska new audio

http://youtu.be/Mg4sqoY5Tb8


http://www.youtube.com/embed/hfOAWhqOHVI

http://www.youtube.com/embed/hGtkZu86Q_c

http://www.youtube.com/embed/L9Xk68D9xIY


Hello Victor!
I loaded 4 my new audio files with 2 person's dialoges. I would like to get your advice about my choice. Thank you for listening! ))))

Jackie- dragon and girl; better?

Hi everyone, I've tried to address Victor's note that I don't need the dragon's hand gesture at the end, I just have to work with the contrast in the body and head. Is this part reading? I've also tried to fix the last gesture on the girl; the consensus was to have her gesture a bit about herself, opening up a bit and looking up a bit, but keeping it small. I've also toned down the bucket because I've gotten repeated notes that it's moving around too much. Thanks for looking and thanks for any feedback!

Jackie- addressing dragon notes from last night

Hey guys, here is my attempt to address the notes from last night on the dragon. I fixed the body pose and flopped the hands/ pole. I changed the first part and I now have him looking over at fr 39. Is his face appealing enough? For the sharp look down around fr 130, I drop his brows a bit because I raised them a bit on the look over. Is this working, or should I raise the brows on the sharp look down? For the end, does this gesture read? Is the face communicating properly? I tried to go with Yatska's suggestion to have him do a more 'haughty' gesture. I'm not sure about the hand pose. I'm also not sure if this gesture is appropriate for him to do because he has to keep one hand balancing the pole on the dock. It is nice because it's going to end up slightly mimicking her gesture. Anyway, thanks for looking!