Shot Progress

Hey guys! Here's my shot as it's coming along - would love some feedback so I can try getting it into splines before class! Thanks!

Mallo - Bus driver

Hi Guys!
This is the newest version of my shot.
I'd like your feedback.
Thanks!

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Viv – "Burn You" WIP

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I've addressed all the notes I received last time for this shot (I can happily list the notes if needed).  I'm still not entirely happy with the expression change around frame 160.  I'm not sure if it still gets lost due to his body movements, so perhaps I should shift the expression change a few frames earlier?  I like the timing of him standing up and placing his hands on the desk, so I'd rather not delay/speed those up unless it's necessary.

Let me know what you guys think.  Thank you and have a great 4th of July!

Benoit - New pass

Hi guys!

Here is a new pass where I:
- Simplified the begining,
- Sharpened the transitions,
- Start blocking the blue guys.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/gf9fugc0yh9es25/benoit_groundpouders_006.mov

I'm still working on it, but any comment is welcome.

Thank you!

Benoit

Jackie- tackling the C curve reversal note

Hi everyone, here I've addressed the note about taking out the C curve reversal pose around frame 131. I've tried to drift her from the pose at 120, into the pose at 163. I'm a bit confused about the direction, because I would think she'd still need to drift back with the "ok" hand gesture, to give her somewhere to go to fr 163. I've left the body movement back to screen left, around fr 125, and I've also left in a bit of the bend on the chest, neck and head. Is this working any better? Thanks and have a great weekend! Jackie

Mallo - Bus driver new version polish.

Hi Guys!
This is my new version.
Thanks!

Jackie- video reference

Hi guys, here is video reference I've done for shot 2 of my project; I'm going to focus on this shot for the last bit of this class. I can get to shot 3 in the fall. Let me know if you have any thoughts; I think take 3 is best. Sorry for the format problem.  cheers, Jackie