Tonight's class

Hi Victor,

I'm sorry, but some unforseen events happened at work today and I'm not sure I'll make it tonight. So here is what I originaly planed to show tonight:

• LINK - The last version of my shot. I changed the end a little bit and add some extra facial animations (brows rise and blink) so it reads more. I also reduced (almost removed) the arm move so it's not stealing the attention from the face.

• LINK - This is an idea for my new assignment. I imagined something in 2 parts:
• The 1st one, with two characters facing for a fight (as in a fight video game). The first character is tough, very cocky and ready to fight. The second character (tough as well) is totally girly. This character acts and hits like a woman which surprises the other one who gets slapped and knocked out.
• In the second part we realized that it was a grandmother / mother playing a video game with her grand son. Then she says the line while standing up and turning the tv off.

Thank you and sorry again if I can't make it tonight.

Benoit

Benoit - Few fixes

Hi there,

Here is the last version of my shot: https://www.dropbox.com/s/r9ys7t7ln6lv0db/benoit_clintEastwood_04.mov
I addressed Victor's notes but I am still struggling a little bit with the final attitude. What do you think?

Thank you!

Fixes

Hi Everyone!

So I think I've addressed all the notes from last class - with the exception of the breath she takes after "thursday". If I have her breath in, it destroys her mouth position or makes her body look like it's having a mini-seizure. I think I might just be doing it wrong. Any ideas? And I'm going to animate the hair next since I've pretty much nailed the body down. Thanks everyone!

Jackie- more progress

Hi everyone, Here's more progress; I've tried to address Victor's notes about the end, and I haven't started offsetting/ overlapping anything yet. On the girl, I'm trying to communicate a snooty/ snobby attitude. Is it reading? As always, I'm open to vetoes on anything, even though I'm working in spline. Thanks for viewing!

Progress So Far

Hi guys! Just wanted to upload my progress so far - I was looking for some feedback on her expression at "Thursday" - I followed Victor's drawing but now I don't know if it feels too pushed or if the expressions after it are just too bland. Advice is appreciated! Thanks!

06 week Yatska new audio

http://youtu.be/Mg4sqoY5Tb8


http://www.youtube.com/embed/hfOAWhqOHVI

http://www.youtube.com/embed/hGtkZu86Q_c

http://www.youtube.com/embed/L9Xk68D9xIY


Hello Victor!
I loaded 4 my new audio files with 2 person's dialoges. I would like to get your advice about my choice. Thank you for listening! ))))

Jackie- dragon and girl; better?

Hi everyone, I've tried to address Victor's note that I don't need the dragon's hand gesture at the end, I just have to work with the contrast in the body and head. Is this part reading? I've also tried to fix the last gesture on the girl; the consensus was to have her gesture a bit about herself, opening up a bit and looking up a bit, but keeping it small. I've also toned down the bucket because I've gotten repeated notes that it's moving around too much. Thanks for looking and thanks for any feedback!